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Open Poetry #44

edge of Spring (tanka)

secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-04-05 05:08 PM

edge of Spring

fine wind-wing fliers
in graceful curves of pursuit...
the world reflected
with blossoms in the water
on this lovely edge of Spring

--- b. e. adams (4/5/2009)

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (04-05-2009 08:05 PM).]

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

1 posted 2009-04-05 05:14 PM

Enjoyed this little gem, dear Bruce.

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

2 posted 2009-04-05 06:41 PM

A fine spring tanka.

critical mass
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since 2009-03-25

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Michigan

3 posted 2009-04-05 08:41 PM

nicely done.
I usually don't like these but this flows really well.

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

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4 posted 2009-04-21 12:13 PM

I love to go back in time and find the little gems tucked among pages of blue. 'edge of spring' is like finding a pirate's treasure and I am happy.

A

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2009-05-02 09:55 PM

Somehow this one slipped past me but I found it and it was worth searching for.
Ida

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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6 posted 2009-05-03 10:35 AM

Bruce, that is one stunning spring tanka!

~ and as Elvis used to say, "Tanka! Tanka very much!"

Sending a springy hug your way!

Linda

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