Open Poetry #44 |
A Little Dream... But Sweet Indeed. |
Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
Gaze far into the soft, night sky; Come... dream a little dream with me: up in the star-drenched, velvet darkness; there, sweet cherished dreams are free from common sense, and circumstance; those things that would such dreams, undo; up there, amongst the moonlit Cloud Cathedrals, sweetest dreams come true. Soft caressed, by whispering Moonwind, gently cradled in my heart, safe forever... loved forever... this is where we, breathless, start to weave together such a dream to make the very stars grow pale; a shining dream of Love Eternal... love we know can never fail. Such a Love, we hope is somewhere out there; but so seldom find; a gentle, tender, trusting Love... a Love that is completely blind save, to itself... a Love that asks no questions; needs no answering; A Love that never sees our faults; it really is the sweetest thing. To dance with You among the stars, our hearts entwined, our spirits free; no creeping, chill caress of doubt, no shadows of uncertainty. Here, is no hurt; here... no betrayal; here, there are no whispered lies; for You are everything my heart desires... so perfect, in my eyes. Gaze far into the soft, night sky; Come... dream a little dream with me. Imagination's soft caress... perhaps, of us, as we could be, if I could magic words into reality... and dreams came true; for there is no-one else at all, with whom I'd share this dream... but You. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am particularly fond of the beginning: "...Come ... dream with me: up in the star-drenched, velvet darkness; there, sweet cherished dreams are free from common sense, and circumstance; those things that would such dreams, undo; up there, amongst the moonlit Cloud Cathedrals..." superb (Romantic) imagery ! MUCH (sustained) applause for this 'penning' !! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
a Love that asks no questions; needs no answering; A Love that never sees our faults; it really is the sweetest thing. To dance with You among the stars, our hearts entwined, our spirits free; no creeping, chill caress of doubt, no shadows of uncertainty. Here, is no hurt; here... no betrayal; here, there are no whispered lies; for You are everything my heart desires... so perfect, in my eyes. Are you reading my heart? ~ARH |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this dream very much... and lucky is the lady so dreamed! *S* |
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