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Open Poetry #44

Ice Queen (Senryu)

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

0 posted 2009-04-03 09:15 PM

Photograph by Haleh Bryan

Glance of pale cold eyes
Shows the winter of your soul,
Frozen forever.

Tousand years are gone, armageddon hasn't come,
Only the cry of a child echoes in the dark.
Back won't go his time as the stars are passing by,
and

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-04-03 09:23 PM

Yo Suncleaver,

This is an excellent senryu, well named. I like the picture too. That's my girl.

Bobby

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2009-04-03 09:29 PM

Now, that's a senryu. Gorgeous picture.
Ida

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2009-04-04 04:24 PM

Oh, I liked this,
but it is not me,
I am warm, and loving,
glowing red inside. lol!

~You have been missed?

~ARH

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-04-05 06:09 PM

Ohh, but that's an enchanting winter!

Perfect!!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2009-04-05 09:30 PM

Beautifully Written! With a hidden story in the view of her eyes!

ARCTIC WIND

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