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angellea
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0 posted 2009-04-03 09:01 PM



DADDY?

Where does it come from?
Why is it here?
“I’ll never be normal”
This I fear

The anger, the pain, the hurt, the confusion…
Is it real or just an illusion?

Where does it come from?
Why is it here?
“I’ll never be normal”
This I fear

The truth, the lie, the reality, the deception …
Is it real or just a misconception?

Where does it come from?
Why is it here?
“I’ll never be normal”
This I fear

Was it real?
Was it you?


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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2009-04-03 09:08 PM


Yo dear Angellea,

There are often many questions asked  about "Daddy".

Love Bobby

Midnitesun
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2 posted 2009-04-03 09:08 PM


It's totally frustrating to have questions, doubts and fears without any answers.
angellea
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3 posted 2009-04-03 09:10 PM


Too true dear Bobby.

Thanks for stopping by.

~Maranda

angellea
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4 posted 2009-04-03 09:12 PM


Midnitesun, your words couldn't be more true.

Answers I'm afraid I'll never have. My Dad died almost four years ago.

This is more emotional than I originally thought.

Thanks so much for stopping by.

~Maranda


unboundpoetess
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5 posted 2009-04-03 09:13 PM


(((( Maranda))))

Had to swallow the lump in my throat. I love what you added. That question will always hang in the air.

Love you to pieces,
Heather

angellea
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6 posted 2009-04-03 09:18 PM


Thanks for the encouragement and support.

This is much harder than I expected. I couldn't add anymore. I'm not ready.

I love you much,

~Maranda

ethome
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7 posted 2009-04-03 09:34 PM


This is very thought provoking. Leaves the door open to many interpretations which is good.
Good work!
Just read the other replies and my heart goes out to you.

Eric

angellea
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8 posted 2009-04-03 09:44 PM


Eric, thank you so much for your kind words.

Thanks for stopping by.

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