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HopeS
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0 posted 2009-04-02 01:23 PM






As Intimate Nights Unfold


As intimate nights unfold
Where a silver path gleams
Its here moonlight lovers
Share in hopes and dreams

Sharing our hearts desire
While the stars glow above
As romance fills the air
Along dreamy paths of love

Spending nights together
As we embraced intimately
Loving dreams we share
Alongside the sapphire sea

Passionately we entwine
Glowing stars light the bay
In dreams you are mine
Until the nights turn to day

Hope ©2009


© Copyright 2009 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
WTBAKELAR
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1 posted 2009-04-02 01:33 PM


This is a very well done picture/poem compilation.

Gentle, casual and tender.
Meant to be read slow.

I love it.  Tracey.

Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 2009-04-02 02:34 PM


This was very romantic Hope....very nice.
Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2009-04-02 03:27 PM


You thread dreams through the whole poem, nicely done.

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4 posted 2009-04-02 05:44 PM


"Passionately we entwine
Glowing stars light the bay
In dreams you are mine
Until the nights turn to day"
love it Hope!!

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5 posted 2009-04-02 07:13 PM


And the nights are sweet.

Very romantic, dear Hope.

Love,
Margherita

LindsayP
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6 posted 2009-04-02 08:22 PM



A lovely sweet romantic post dear Hope

in your uaual fine style. Thank you. Love.

Lindsay

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7 posted 2009-04-03 08:58 AM


Beautifully romantic! *S*
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8 posted 2009-04-03 10:24 AM


...aw, yes..."until the nights turn to days"...


Linda

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