Open Poetry #44 |
As Intimate Nights Unfold |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
As Intimate Nights Unfold As intimate nights unfold Where a silver path gleams Its here moonlight lovers Share in hopes and dreams Sharing our hearts desire While the stars glow above As romance fills the air Along dreamy paths of love Spending nights together As we embraced intimately Loving dreams we share Alongside the sapphire sea Passionately we entwine Glowing stars light the bay In dreams you are mine Until the nights turn to day Hope ©2009 |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
This is a very well done picture/poem compilation. Gentle, casual and tender. Meant to be read slow. I love it. Tracey. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This was very romantic Hope....very nice. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
You thread dreams through the whole poem, nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Passionately we entwine Glowing stars light the bay In dreams you are mine Until the nights turn to day" love it Hope!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And the nights are sweet. Very romantic, dear Hope. Love, Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A lovely sweet romantic post dear Hope in your uaual fine style. Thank you. Love. Lindsay |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautifully romantic! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...aw, yes..."until the nights turn to days"... Linda |
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