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Open Poetry #44
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2islander2
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by the sea
0 posted 2009-04-01 04:58 PM

Trees sing,
perfection swift
through the windows,
mountain's tears
sweep the valley.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (04-02-2009 01:39 AM).]
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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2009-04-02 11:43 PM

2islander2 - h'mmmmm, this should be bumped up, here we go...

BC
Mysteria
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2 posted 2009-04-03 12:41 PM

What a lovely pictures of spring.
suthern
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3 posted 2009-04-03 09:40 AM

mountain's tears
sweep the valley

I love this image! *S*
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2009-04-03 10:35 AM

"mountain's tears
sweep the valley."

~ Excellent!!!! What a creatively expressed visual!!!


Linda
2islander2
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5 posted 2009-04-04 05:12 AM

Thank You Bill, Mysteria, Suthern and EAb for the supportive and kind comments.
regards

yann
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6 posted 2009-04-20 02:44 AM

yann,

Sometimes the most simple poems are the most beautiful poems.  

Alison
Prasad Nataraj
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7 posted 2009-04-20 08:03 AM

Love the spring, lovely writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"
2islander2
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by the sea
8 posted 2009-04-20 10:40 AM

Thanks Alison for the appreciated comment.

yann
2islander2
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by the sea
9 posted 2009-04-20 10:41 AM

Thanks Prasadfor the  kind comment, let's enjoy seasons.

yann
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2009-04-20 10:34 PM

Nice...James
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