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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Life is... Dreams, realities (or illusions) and memories. Life is... A story that tells itself and leaves you guessing Life is... Full of dark spaces filled with stars. Ida Werrett |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
succinct and fine! I am especially fond of the ending!: "Life is... Full of dark spaces filled with stars(!)" MUCH applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I liked this  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you Bruce, appreciate your reply. Ida Thank you SEA, glad you like it. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Life is... Dreams, realities (or illusions) and memories. Life is... A story that tells itself and leaves you guessing Life is... Full of dark spaces filled with stars" ~ Yeppers! You said it well, my dear Ida Belle! I especially liked the closing stanza!  Love, Light, and Life!!! Linda  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
dark spaces filled with stars, yes, I see that. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Ida, This is well put together, and also very true. I like it. Love Bobby |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Ida, I am so glad you left spaces between the lines, so much to fill in as we go through life. Very nice, Love, Tracey. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"Life is... Full of dark spaces filled with stars." nice thought |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like the simplicity and truth of this poem, Ida. Love, A |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Life is good Ida, lovely writing. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"leaves you guessing" Ida, that is so true. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Well, my life is full of guessing games. Never know what will happen from one day to another. |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Life is... A story that tells itself and leaves you guessing Aint that the honest truth. Even with good decision making...stuff happens. |
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