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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-04-01 01:25 PM


Bones is all alone.  
He has no one to turn to.  
Bones doesn’t even think
about “what if”.  

Bones doesn’t have any “what if”s.  

As a common street criminal,
you can do anything you want to,
to hurt Bones.  

He won’t tell,
because he has no one to tell.

Bobby

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angellea
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1 posted 2009-04-01 01:29 PM


Oh, Bones. You can tell me.

There is no sadder feeling than feeling alone.

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-04-01 01:33 PM


Thanks dear Angellea,

Hey, wait a minute, you're not a cop are you?

Love Bobby

angellea
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3 posted 2009-04-01 01:45 PM


Heavens no! :-)
Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-04-01 01:54 PM


Thanks dear Angellea,

Well, that's good.  Then Bones can talk to you about his problems.

Love from Bones

angellea
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5 posted 2009-04-01 01:58 PM


Anytime Bones. I pass no judgement.
Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-04-01 02:25 PM


Yo dear Angellea,

You sound like someone Bones can trust.

I bet you'd be friends with Bones cousin Marika.  I'll have to drag Marika into the Bones series.  You might like Marika.

Love Bobby

angellea
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7 posted 2009-04-01 02:33 PM


I'm intrigued already. I would love to meet Marika.
Marchmadness
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8 posted 2009-04-01 02:41 PM


There's nothing sadder than a child with no one to tell.
                                  Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2009-04-01 02:58 PM


Dear Angellea,

Here is the add on Amazon for Marika.
http://www.amazon.com/Marika-Robert-E-Jordan/dp/1425795668/ref=sr_1_3?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1238612056&sr=1-3

Marika is an old childhood friend who I haven't seen in many years.  Her's is a sad story, many of Marika's friends can't bear to read about her.

I gave her a happy ending.  That was probably make-believe.

Love Bobby


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10 posted 2009-04-01 04:16 PM


that is so painfully sad...
Robert E. Jordan
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11 posted 2009-04-01 04:20 PM


Thanks dear SEA,

Yes, it is very sad when you don't have anyone you can trust enough to tell your troubles to.

Love Bobby

angellea
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12 posted 2009-04-01 09:25 PM


I am very interested in reading Marika's story. Everyone deserves a happy ending.:-)
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13 posted 2009-04-02 09:02 AM


Sometimes, even those with ones to tell find they have no one who'll listen...

{{{{{hugging Bones}}}}}

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2009-04-02 09:29 AM


Thanks dear Angellea,

Everyones deserves a happy ending, but that doesn't always happen.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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15 posted 2009-04-02 09:31 AM


Thanks dear Suthern,

What you say is very true.  Thanks for yur insightful comment.

Love Bobby

ethome
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16 posted 2009-04-02 03:41 PM


That's sad.
You have this ability to draw many different types of emotions out of your readers without using too many words.
That's a talent Bobby

The scene is a sad one but realistic.

Eric

Robert E. Jordan
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17 posted 2009-04-02 04:53 PM


Thanks Eric,

I'm pleased that the poem worked that well for you.

Thanks for the very kind words on the poem.

Bobby

Bill Charles
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18 posted 2009-04-02 11:41 PM


Bobby - Tell Bones he can talk with me anytime. It's not good to have no one to talk with, I know...

BC

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