Open Poetry #44 |
Bones Has No One To Tell |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones is all alone. He has no one to turn to. Bones doesn’t even think about “what if”. Bones doesn’t have any “what if”s. As a common street criminal, you can do anything you want to, to hurt Bones. He won’t tell, because he has no one to tell. Bobby |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
Oh, Bones. You can tell me. There is no sadder feeling than feeling alone. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Angellea, Hey, wait a minute, you're not a cop are you? Love Bobby |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
Heavens no! :-) |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Angellea, Well, that's good. Then Bones can talk to you about his problems. Love from Bones |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
Anytime Bones. I pass no judgement. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Angellea, You sound like someone Bones can trust. I bet you'd be friends with Bones cousin Marika. I'll have to drag Marika into the Bones series. You might like Marika. Love Bobby |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
I'm intrigued already. I would love to meet Marika. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
There's nothing sadder than a child with no one to tell. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Angellea, Here is the add on Amazon for Marika. http://www.amazon.com/Marika-Robert-E-Jordan/dp/1425795668/ref=sr_1_3?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1238612056&sr=1-3 Marika is an old childhood friend who I haven't seen in many years. Her's is a sad story, many of Marika's friends can't bear to read about her. I gave her a happy ending. That was probably make-believe. Love Bobby |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
that is so painfully sad... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear SEA, Yes, it is very sad when you don't have anyone you can trust enough to tell your troubles to. Love Bobby |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
I am very interested in reading Marika's story. Everyone deserves a happy ending.:-) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes, even those with ones to tell find they have no one who'll listen... {{{{{hugging Bones}}}}} |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Angellea, Everyones deserves a happy ending, but that doesn't always happen. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Suthern, What you say is very true. Thanks for yur insightful comment. Love Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's sad. You have this ability to draw many different types of emotions out of your readers without using too many words. That's a talent Bobby The scene is a sad one but realistic. Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, I'm pleased that the poem worked that well for you. Thanks for the very kind words on the poem. Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - Tell Bones he can talk with me anytime. It's not good to have no one to talk with, I know... BC |
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