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SEA
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0 posted 2009-03-31 09:12 PM






it’s there, in your voice…absolute elation
I just don’t have words….for complete clarification
and I lack quite desperately….the eloquence of emotion
unable to describe….my own heart’s devotion

it’s there, in your eyes…..a connection to my soul
a limitless love…..far beyond any control
a tie that binds….with explanation unfound
yet to you I am gladly…..forever bound

it’s there, in your kiss….to which there is none could compare
there never has been…… there never will be, to this, I swear
your lips so perfect….left me forever enraptured
all of my being taken…..so blissfully captured

it’s there, in your touch…….raw lustful electricity
always with breathless anticipation……of your hands upon me
a compelling connecting…..that cannot be denied
in the softest of caressing…..our souls collide


it’s there, in your love…..the only place I want to be
I am yours….I am yours….eternally


~SEA~


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1 posted 2009-03-31 09:18 PM


Beautiful...true soul mates.
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-03-31 09:24 PM


Yo SEA,

This is a nice poem.  I almost couldn't get past the picture.  That looks like the power station at Penn Treaty Park here in Philly.  It's just down the street from here.

I've kissed my girl there too, many years ago.

I've worked all over the world.  I always come back to the hood.

WOW!

Bobby

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3 posted 2009-03-31 09:42 PM


SEA

Nice poem.

Anybody with that much passion must still be single.

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4 posted 2009-03-31 09:47 PM


(:

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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5 posted 2009-03-31 10:04 PM


You are the one
That I would choose
So I could see
All those tattoos!!!!

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6 posted 2009-04-01 12:59 PM


Loving feelings most beautifully expressed

Hope

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7 posted 2009-04-01 02:56 AM



quote:
Anybody with that much passion must still be single.

Ha!  Speak for yourself, lol.  

(30 years of raw passion and counting   )

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8 posted 2009-04-01 09:00 AM


so SO lovin' this!!

wow!

lucky man he is, yaknow.

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9 posted 2009-04-01 09:19 AM


and I lack quite desperately….the eloquence of emotion
unable to describe….my own heart’s devotion

No lack here, dear lady... just beautiful expression! *S*

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10 posted 2009-04-01 09:54 AM


this is nice, I liked it
SEA
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thank you all very much....

CM, yes...I'm very married actually.

Balladeer, I will send pictures if you'd like


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12 posted 2009-04-01 03:24 PM


What a fantasticly awe-some poem.
He's a lucky guy,

Well done Suzy,

Very nice indeed.

Tracey.

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13 posted 2009-04-01 03:30 PM


A very romantic and beautifully written poem!
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14 posted 2009-04-01 04:47 PM


~VERY ROMANTIC! ~ I love this Susan! ~ Excellent poetry, excellent words!


ARCTIC WIND

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15 posted 2009-04-01 08:43 PM



A very sweet and romantic poem dear Susan

a joy to read. Love to you dear Lady.

Lindsay

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16 posted 2009-04-02 08:56 AM


You know I love this.

and, "our souls collide"...great stuff.
But to me, the ending where you repeat "I am yours"....that is greatness.

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17 posted 2009-04-02 11:45 PM


SEA - this one slipped right on by me. Your words are always touching, and they are still in this writing...

BC

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18 posted 2009-04-03 03:24 AM


Lovely romantic writing SEA.

In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine.
In these narrow rooms no tears are seen, no laughter heard!

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19 posted 2009-04-03 10:19 AM


I love your 'love' poetry! ~ sensuous, sensitive, and highly 'poetical'!

~ and your passion pics fit perfectly!


Linda

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20 posted 2009-04-14 12:59 PM


...and I am in love with this poem, SEA.

A

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21 posted 2009-04-14 11:39 AM


Its so romantic.......its the whole essence of having read a whole romance novel from beginning to end....its complete...beautifully written.
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22 posted 2009-04-14 11:26 PM


SEA - you give me goose bumps with this writing...

BC

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23 posted 2009-04-15 02:55 AM


   Like the song says. " Love is a many Splendord thing."  Very nice.

Billie C.

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24 posted 2009-04-16 03:10 AM


God it's great to read you again!
It's been too long again.
This was wonderful, dripping with talent, love, lust, passion and everything in between.
Everything I expect from you <3

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25 posted 2009-04-18 03:23 PM


thank you all SO much!! you guys rock my socks
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