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....I am yours |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 it’s there, in your voice…absolute elation I just don’t have words….for complete clarification and I lack quite desperately….the eloquence of emotion unable to describe….my own heart’s devotion it’s there, in your eyes…..a connection to my soul a limitless love…..far beyond any control a tie that binds….with explanation unfound yet to you I am gladly…..forever bound it’s there, in your kiss….to which there is none could compare there never has been…… there never will be, to this, I swear your lips so perfect….left me forever enraptured all of my being taken…..so blissfully captured it’s there, in your touch…….raw lustful electricity always with breathless anticipation……of your hands upon me a compelling connecting…..that cannot be denied in the softest of caressing…..our souls collide it’s there, in your love…..the only place I want to be I am yours….I am yours….eternally ~SEA~ |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
Beautiful...true soul mates. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo SEA, This is a nice poem. I almost couldn't get past the picture. That looks like the power station at Penn Treaty Park here in Philly. It's just down the street from here. I've kissed my girl there too, many years ago. I've worked all over the world. I always come back to the hood. WOW! Bobby |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
SEA Nice poem. Anybody with that much passion must still be single. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
(: -Juju |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You are the one That I would choose So I could see All those tattoos!!!! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Loving feelings most beautifully expressed Hope |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
quote: Ha! Speak for yourself, lol.  (30 years of raw passion and counting  ) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so SO lovin' this!!  wow!lucky man he is, yaknow. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and I lack quite desperately….the eloquence of emotion unable to describe….my own heart’s devotion No lack here, dear lady... just beautiful expression! *S* |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
this is nice, I liked it |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much....  CM, yes...I'm very married actually. Balladeer, I will send pictures if you'd like |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
What a fantasticly awe-some poem. He's a lucky guy, Well done Suzy, Very nice indeed. Tracey. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very romantic and beautifully written poem! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
~VERY ROMANTIC! ~ I love this Susan! ~ Excellent poetry, excellent words!  ARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very sweet and romantic poem dear Susan a joy to read. Love to you dear Lady. Lindsay |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
You know I love this. and, "our souls collide"...great stuff. But to me, the ending where you repeat "I am yours"....that is greatness. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - this one slipped right on by me. Your words are always touching, and they are still in this writing... BC |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Lovely romantic writing SEA. In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love your 'love' poetry! ~ sensuous, sensitive, and highly 'poetical'!  ~ and your passion pics fit perfectly! Linda |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
...and I am in love with this poem, SEA. A |
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k_love_02 Junior Member
since 2008-07-07
Posts 24 |
Its so romantic.......its the whole essence of having read a whole romance novel from beginning to end....its complete...beautifully written. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - you give me goose bumps with this writing... BC |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Like the song says. " Love is a many Splendord thing." Very nice. Billie C. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
God it's great to read you again! It's been too long again. This was wonderful, dripping with talent, love, lust, passion and everything in between. Everything I expect from you <3 |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all SO much!! you guys rock my socks  |
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