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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-03-31 01:07 PM



you bought those new dresses
and I wanted you to model them
still on the hangers
pretending I wasn't there

and then ask questions of my eyes
as they admired your hemline
draped over a high back chair
folded neatly with the tag still on

with some occasional small talk then
that get comfortable in my skin kind
as you asked if I liked your choices
and how they looked nearly on you

when you wore them to my imagination
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daark (viscosity)

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-03-31 01:26 PM


You created lovely intimacy around that hemline, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2009-03-31 01:41 PM


as you asked if I liked your choices
and how they looked nearly on you

when you wore them to my imagination

And the answer made her eyes dance. *S* Beautiful write! *S*

unboundpoetess
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3 posted 2009-03-31 11:30 PM


Adore this.

Heather

pretty1
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4 posted 2009-04-01 01:52 AM


This was lovely!   It was as if the anticipation between them was heightened and unspoken.
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-04-01 06:29 AM


ms mar, thanks special lady!!


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ms suthern, thanks so much babe


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ms Heather...thank you for the touch


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ms pretty1, I suspect there is some unsaid communication..thanks babe

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
6 posted 2009-04-01 09:53 AM


nice
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2009-04-01 11:41 AM


Thanks DStar
angellea
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8 posted 2009-04-01 12:52 PM


So flirtatious...

I've read several of your poems. This is the first I've had the nerve to comment on. You are a TRUE talent.

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2009-04-02 06:31 AM


ms angellea

I am blessed by your read and comment, thanks ms, hope your nerve stays with you

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