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of flaws and highways
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of flaws and highways |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the way back down from love town seemed like a whole different highway the ocean was older then like a friend that had not been seen for too long I replayed the video of our hunting for flaws and reasons why or why not and laughed at my purposeful blindness how I wasn't sorry I couldn't find any but maybe you did find a few or more though they would have not been new ones but second handed already adjusted if there were any left after the yard sales there was a place at the bottom of the hill where I curbed my leather and smoked a cigar I guess in celebration of our beginning or of our ending if that is how it becomes highways need that sometimes or they stay lonely ____________________ daark |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"the ocean was older" Understanding this. Enjoyed the blacktop. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks midnite friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I love your highway reflections. They go deeper than the surface. Beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and laughed at my purposeful blindness how I wasn't sorry I couldn't find any Those love towns can certainly alter our perceptions, can't they? *S* This is fantastic! *S* |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I am particularly fond of the beginning of this effective 'write'!: "the way back down from love town seemed like a whole different highway the ocean was older then like a friend that had not been seen for too long" applause!! |
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pretty1 Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 22 |
I thoroughly loved this! I hope it is only the beginning of many new highways to be traveled. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks babe _________________ ms suthern, thanks so much lady friend ________________ 2ndhandreampoet...thank you for the review __________________ ms pretty1, you know there are so many roads close by..soon, thanks babe |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
in crazy car love, his rear view mirror offered a glimpse at her past. Indigo |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Fine poetry Friend! ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi..and the limo driver charged admission ...care to go for a drive? thanks babe ________________ aw, thanks my friend |
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