Open Poetry #44 |
Before the Fields of Tyburn |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
In fiery flight the sun rises to the sky, Left low, grim and alone to sit and ponder why My life has come to end upon this fateful morn, Murder's crimson omen, bloodiest red the dawn. Led in chains through jeering crowds, mind with terror fraught, Ravens gather on the gates, eager for their sport, Their dreadful tree bears fruits of death, stripped in decay, The carpenter's bloodthirsty child waits for it's prey. Ever has mankind condemned where Jesus forgave, Hid away their sin and shame in an unmarked grave, Shrouded from the sight of God, will he find his child? Where I lie angels weep for innocence beguiled. In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This reminds me of one of my favorite Eric Bogle songs "Singing the Spirit Home"... Well done!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, oh yes, God will always find his children ~ be they mortal or immortal. A grave and heavy piece of poetry! ~ But your writing is as brilliant as ever!!! Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Such a powerful verse, dear Luke. Love, Margherita |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suncleaver - these words say a lot. Nice write... BC |
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