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Suncleaver
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0 posted 2009-03-31 02:18 AM





In fiery flight the sun rises to the sky,
Left low, grim and alone to sit and ponder why
My life has come to end upon this fateful morn,
Murder's crimson omen, bloodiest red the dawn.

Led in chains through jeering crowds, mind with terror fraught,
Ravens gather on the gates, eager for their sport,
Their dreadful tree bears fruits of death, stripped in decay,
The carpenter's bloodthirsty child waits for it's prey.

Ever has mankind condemned where Jesus forgave,
Hid away their sin and shame in an unmarked grave,
Shrouded from the sight of God, will he find his child?
Where I lie angels weep for innocence beguiled.

In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine.
In these narrow rooms no tears are seen, no laughter heard!

© Copyright 2009 Luke Doubtfire - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2009-03-31 01:19 PM


This reminds me of one of my favorite Eric Bogle songs "Singing the Spirit Home"... Well done!!
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2009-03-31 03:36 PM


Yes, oh yes, God will always find his children ~ be they mortal or immortal.

A grave and heavy piece of poetry! ~ But your writing is as brilliant as ever!!!


Linda

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3 posted 2009-03-31 04:10 PM


quote:
Ever has mankind condemned where Jesus forgave,
Hid away their sin and shame in an unmarked grave,
Shrouded from the sight of God, will he find his child?
Where I lie angels weep for innocence beguiled.



Such a powerful verse, dear Luke.

Love,
Margherita

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2009-03-31 04:12 PM


Suncleaver - these words say a lot. Nice write...

BC

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