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LindsayP
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0 posted 2009-03-30 08:08 PM




                 What If

What if I had my life to live over
I wonder if I’d do the same things again,
Especially if I knew what I now know
No, I think from that pathway I'd refrain.

It would be a much different pathway I’d follow.
For I’d know all the pitfalls to elude,
Perhaps I’d become a property investor
Or a share trader might be the pathway pursued.

For a good education I’d go off to Uni’
To study hard and make a success of my life,
I’d steer clear of all the backbreaking work
But I’d still take my wife as my wife.

Of course if I did have my life to live over
And the pathway to success I wished to climb,
I dare say that I’d do the same things again
For you do what you think is right at the time.

But then I think, what if I had won Tatts-lotto,
Say back about twenty-five years ago,
Perhaps I wouldn’t be in a wheelchair today
And maybe a different pathway I’d hoe.

But then I think of all my many blessings,
My keen memory to me is number one,
Also to have a very broad sense of humour,
So I think my battle is more than half won.

The very fact that I have a large loving family
Who all help ease the pressures of life,
Yes, every day I count all my blessings
Number one being my wonderful wife.

                                             Lindsay P Wilson


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Mysteria
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1 posted 2009-03-30 10:40 PM


What a heartfelt poem for your wife to treasure.  I have often done the "what if?"  Once I do it I always come to the same conclusion, I would do it all the same.  Loved the message you shared in this.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

1slick_lady
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2 posted 2009-03-30 10:44 PM


the only true value in this life
is the ones we love

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3 posted 2009-03-30 11:09 PM


awwww....this is so sweet...

yes, for sure some things I think we would all do a bit different...I know I have a few

Eloise
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4 posted 2009-03-30 11:21 PM


This is a sweet poem.  Obviously, family is number one.  And if I had to do it all over again, I'd probably still do it the same.
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5 posted 2009-03-30 11:31 PM


Lindsay, What a beautiful tribute to your wife and the love she has for you.

I know I would have done so many things different, if I knew then, what I know now.

Very nice write.

Tracey.

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6 posted 2009-03-30 11:40 PM


Lucky girl..Mrs.P

Loved to read  your  refreshingly positive poem..Kind regards Boshii2

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7 posted 2009-03-31 02:16 AM


My dear Aussie Man, you and Norma deserve each other!!! ~ and that is a big compliment that I am paying to each of you!!!

Love your writing ~ and the jockular man who has travelled a difficult path but has done it with integrity, grace, and kindness!


Linda

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8 posted 2009-03-31 01:17 PM


When you can think of the fortunes you might have known... and then realize you already have your treasure... it certainly touches this heart! *S*

Beautiful write, my friend... big hugs to both of you! *S*

HopeS
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9 posted 2009-03-31 02:40 PM


Yes what more could you need a loving family are blessings indeed

Hope

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10 posted 2009-03-31 04:11 PM


LindsayP - you bring up many thoughts in this writing to ponder over. I wonder also at times...

BC

LindsayP
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11 posted 2009-03-31 09:02 PM



To my very good friends, Mysteria,
1slick Lady, Susan, Eloise, Tracey, Boshii,

Linda, Ruth, Hope and Bill. You don't know just how much your kind response means to me. I love you all, God Bless.

Lindsay

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