Open Poetry #44 |
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Mom, The Teacher |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA ![]() |
Mom, The Teacher Sometimes, we take for granted, The talents that we receive, Each has certain abilities, Gifts hard to conceive, We’re born into this world, Not knowing where we’re bound, Just guessing at our future, And grasping at what we’ve found, To each a little piece, Of our parents we can show, And share treasures of what they are, While they teach us as we grow, But when we look back on the path, They tried to guide us down, The most that they can hope for, We learn to swim before we drown, So to the parents that gave their all, Teaching by example was the best, And just a little note to my mom, Billie, For me, “You passed the test”. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a wonderful tribute to your mom and parents in general! I'm sure you also made her proud. Eloise |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This would be a wonderful Mother's Day poem, Tracey. Would make any Mom happy. Ida |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Eloise, and Ida, Thank you for dropping in today to say Hi. I had to give a little shout out to my mom, Billie Cullimore, She is new to PIPTALK, and is having a good time here. This is just a little poem thanking her for my tallent. Hope you enjoy both hers and my poems. Thank you all, Love Tracey. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am always moved when love and gratitude are expressed for our parents. I think you have penned a most beautiful tribute, that will make your dear Mom smile and warm her heart. It's great that your Mom Billie has come to share her own talent on these blue pages. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WTBAKELAR - nice to see a poem for the parents. You did good... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My Mom had quite a sense of humour. She used to say to me, "Do as I say ~ not as I do!" ![]() It would appear that your Mom ~ Billie Cullimore ~ taught you right! It also appears that you inherited her great jeans! I mean, "genes"! lol Here's a big hug for each of you! ![]() ![]() Linda |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
I liked this. I had a mom too. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
But when we look back on the path, They tried to guide us down, The most that they can hope for, We learn to swim before we drown, Mums Tracey, how could we do without them and I bet you make your Mum very proud. Enjoyed the read. Take care my friend. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo WTBAKELAR, It’s surprising how many people are related in these poetry sites. This is a sweet poem. Bobby |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
for me, it was my Dad ![]() |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
To you, my special son, Tracey, we have always been as close as a mother and son could be and I am so proud of you in so many ways. And proud that you want to admit that I am your, Mom. Thank You |
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WTBAKELAR![]()
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Thank you, each and every one for your kind comments, and for welcoming my Mom in to the PIP family. I know you will enjoy her work as much as I do. Love and gratitude to all, Tracey. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've already enjoyed some of your mom's poetry... and now, I'm enjoying this wonderful love-filled tribute. *S* Bravo to the both of you! *S* |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
How sweet...I hope that my two sons are as proud of me one day. |
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