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Eloise
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0 posted 2009-03-30 07:39 PM


You can not box it in at all.
It can't be held within four walls.
It's free to wander here and there
For private use or maybe share.

It brings with it so many sounds,
But sometimes there aren't any found.
It takes us where we've been before,
Or maybe through a mystery door.

It doesn't cost a single dime.
Just a bit of private time.
These thoughts I cherish just for me
Are held within my memory.

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Artic Wind
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1 posted 2009-03-30 07:42 PM


Keep them there! ~ Memories are precious! ~ Enjoyed your thoughts


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2 posted 2009-03-30 10:41 PM


In the end that is all we can leave, and they are truly treasured.
Margherita
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3 posted 2009-03-31 03:43 PM


Beautiful and so true!

Love,
Margherita

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2009-03-31 04:06 PM


Eloise - memories are some good, and some not so good. This poem expresses the good ones, nice write...

BC

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Gaia
5 posted 2009-03-31 07:21 PM


Profound, and a positively truthful write!
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