Open Poetry #44 |
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Remember. |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
Remember me, when East winds whisper from the coast, through mountains high; from far across the velvet depths; can you make out their gentle cry? for a love, that never should have happened; it was not to be; a love that never could have happened; you were just too far away. Remember me, when dusk comes creeping as the day is closing fast and the Evening star is rising beautiful... low, in the West. Bright and pure, and innocent; like first love, when it's just begun to blossom; If I could, but turn the clock back to when we were young. Remember me, as night steals in, and the moon is rising high, drifting through the silky darkness... did you feel that tiny sigh? For all the world, just like some ghostly, swansdown feather touching light upon your cheek; perhaps, a thought I asked the wind to bring tonight. Remember me, when raindrops gently patter on your windowpane; tracing tiny, crystal rivers; merging... until none remain alone. They are the lucky ones; for though they shimmer down to die; at least, they have each other so much more than lonely tears I cry. Remember me, or I become just one more memory, not quite saved from down the path we all must travel, from the cradle to the grave; and that, I think, would break my heart, for all I have... so sad, but true; is hope, that you forget me not; this tiny flame still burns for you. Remember me, if only, in your dreams; for, that is all that we can ever hope for; only there, can you and I, my love, be free; Only there, can our lips touch; only there, this last, bright ember of the flames of love that fate decreed we should not taste... Remember. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
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I am especially fond of: "Remember me, when dusk comes creeping as the day is closing fast and the Evening star is rising beautiful... low, in the West. Bright and pure, and innocent; like first love, when it's just begun to blossom; If I could, but turn the clock back to when we were young." applause for this Romantic 'penning' !! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Romantic! ~ Enjoyed ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Remember me, when raindrops gently patter on your windowpane; tracing tiny, crystal rivers; merging... until none remain alone. They are the lucky ones; for though they shimmer down to die; at least, they have each other so much more than lonely tears I cry. Remember me, or I become just one more memory, not quite saved from down the path we all must travel, from the cradle to the grave; and that, I think, would break my heart, for all I have... so sad, but true; is hope, that you forget me not; this tiny flame still burns for you. Remember me, if only, in your dreams; for, that is all that we can ever hope for; only there, can you and I, my love" right to the heart this one goes....for reals ![]() |
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