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serquelia
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since 2009-05-27
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Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-05-30 12:26 PM


On a cool Autumn day,
leaves on trees so colorful
in there oranges,yellows and reds.
Soon to fall so all can play
from the dancing of a new season.

To some it may not seem long
but it has to come along.
As we start to gather,
or would we rather not think
about another reason to enjoy this season.

You see I have to rake
or go on seeing leaves on my yard.

The kids may play of what a fun day they may have.
So afterall its not a bad feeling
but atleast they enjoyed
the time of their lives.

As if you didnt know
there is energy in every month
that some can only understand
that it has an effect on,
You cannot control it.

As winter comes,
dont be fooled by it.

You never do know
how much snow that will blow,
or how many inches
until you go out
and your teeth clenches.

To go snow mobile riding
making fresh new tracks
as you go back.

As a matter of fact
as the snow falls it covers every inch of ground.

As going in the snow
coming to a creek
where a deer and her fawn are drinking.

There are many others nearby,
that to some may fascinate the eye.

How precious to see
so many not knowing whether they be buck or doe.

Having a camera snapping a picture
of them standing there,
but beware there may be noise
as to disturb your perfect chance;
not to hear or see a glance.

Your so lucky and all along were so finicky,
that such a time would spoil your life.


[This message has been edited by serquelia (05-31-2009 04:50 PM).]

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1 posted 2009-05-31 02:16 AM


Beautiful imagery. I wish I could enjoy the snow more, but it's gone now, so I'll appreciate the warmth while it lasts..

..maybe a couple months a year!

Bloodline
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since 2009-05-23
Posts 236
Oklahoma
2 posted 2009-05-31 09:46 AM


Nature blesses us with
moments as these, enjoyed,

Bloodline

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