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Open Poetry #44

Love's Twin

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

0 posted 2009-03-29 06:04 PM

A passion lived among us,
Till disappearing
Within love's twin.

What it became,
Was the falling of jacks
As the ball bounced away,
A pointless sin.

What it was
Is now a loss,
Jumping over steps,
Scratching sweaty pores,

Wondering,
What could be changed,
How it could morph,
Why I want this.

To forget inspiration,
Of unwrapping clothes
With playful love.

To see inside,
Eye’s of true life,
Not deceiving peace
Who lives to gain, not give.

But as a beauty dies,
I die with it,
While weeping for love,
And searching, for what was.

For true passion,
Underneath the skin,
Beneath the lies,
Of love's twin.

"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

1 posted 2009-03-29 06:25 PM

I really enjoyed this poem. Nice to see you in open Free

In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine.
In these narrow rooms no tears are seen, no laughter heard!

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2009-03-30 12:24 PM

Thank you!

I'm always in teen, and I thought I would get out today.

"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick

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