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JDH Junior Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 12Illinois, U.S. |
tiny, little Details Were my eyes a dreary canvas colored by sadness gray Were they mirrors of my mind giving my secrets away Did the world stop turning or spin out of control Did the earth really shake or did she crack thunder in my soul Did my feet leave the ground or was I glued down to the floor Did I almost tread backwards and just walk out the door Did it last just fleeting seconds or does the moment persist because I’m still asking questions about a tiny, little kiss |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Pip! Your first entry is absolutely lovely! Love, Margherita  |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
JDH Did it last just fleeting seconds or does the moment persist because I’m still asking questions about a tiny, little kiss This is the best part of this. It says everything else. I think we all remember this thought. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, the power that can be "in a tiny little kiss"!  May there be many more to come! A delighful debuting poem! Hi, there! Welcome aboard the PiP Ship! I hope you enjoy sailing these pages of blue! Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel  |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Welcome to Passions!!!  This is a really good start on your time with us.... Please check your e-mail for a special greeting! What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail? |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Did the earth really shake or did she crack thunder in my soul Nice work, and welcome. Heather |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JD, Just yesterday I was thinking about the power of a touch, a look, a caress, and here you've nailed it on the head. Welcome to Passions! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions. The essence of love really is all in the tiny details, isn't it? Looking forward to more from your pen. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Welcome, Welcome, Welcome to PiP. What a great introduction - I am waiting for more already. I really loved this poem. Alison |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 WELCOME TO PIP!! ARCTIC WIND |
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JDH Junior Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 12Illinois, U.S. |
Thanks for the kind words and warm welcome I hadn't written in several years (i used to post on here in teen poetry about 9 years ago under my first and last name)and then this little experience happened upon me, so I decided to jot it down. I figured since I wrote it, I may as well share it with someone since I dared not ever let her see it! I dont know if I'll be writing again anytime soon, but if I do you guys will be the first to know... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well it's a pleasure to read you, glad you found your way back. Love the special effects and tiny little details of what must have been a kiss you'll never forget..... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is wonderful!!! (As that kiss must have been! LOL) I hope you do post more... welcome back! *S* |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very cute romantic poem JDH, well written Welcome back to PIP and I hope to see some more from you. Take care. Lindsay |
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