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Local Rebel
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0 posted 2009-03-28 09:52 PM


she wounded me
like everybody
she just wanted what's hers

the toy

it's hers
and during her
sniffing of the lesion

maybe I anthropomorphized
that
she realized

or
maybe she does

it's almost penitent

the way she
licked my hand
and gazed up

but

she'll always want
to play you know

she'll always want
the toy

like everybody
but

worth it


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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-03-29 05:45 AM


As long as you know and agree ...

This is a very good write!

Love,
Margherita

Martie
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2 posted 2009-03-29 10:55 AM


Hi Reb!  This could be part of the lyrics in "You always hurt the one you love", only your take is much more original.  
passing shadows
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3 posted 2009-03-29 11:10 AM


well look who is here again! I've been wondering about you.

Yes, some things are worth it, some not. I've been the toy and I've played with toys...whatever fits the day I guess.

missed you  

Noel
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4 posted 2009-03-29 12:50 PM


What a great slice of life.  How very clever.
Local Rebel
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5 posted 2009-03-29 05:34 PM


thanks all... and what can I say?

she doesn't fetch my slippers or the paper -- but she's a pretty good little dog -- bit agressive for a Boston Terrier -- but I love her just the same...


BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2009-03-29 09:15 PM


Sounds like she's got you trained!

Cute, your dog and you!

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7 posted 2009-03-30 04:10 PM


it's almost penitent

the way she
licked my hand
and gazed up

but

she'll always want
to play you know

she'll always want
the toy

like everybody
but

worth it

They are, aren't they? *S* Of course... my buddies are cats... but truer friends just don't exist. *S*

And now...

*GLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE* My most wonderful leather-feathered nephew is here... life is GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!! *S* Stick around stranger... we don't bite... much... *G* And we've had our shots??? LOL

Toerag
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Ala bam a
8 posted 2009-03-30 05:51 PM


nighthawk?....Is that you?...How the hell are ya?....Tried Wild Turkey American Honey yet?
serenity blaze
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9 posted 2009-03-30 05:58 PM


What? no pics?

I'm a dawg woman yanno. I've been known to play with kitties too, though.


Artic Wind
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10 posted 2009-03-30 07:19 PM


Rebel, this is a good poem!

*this one is to Karen, LOL be proud your a kitty player I have three myself


ARCTIC WIND

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