Open Poetry #44 |
Reflections in a Poet's Moon. |
Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
A soft and balmy summer night; a Poet's Moon smiles down, serene and pale, from out a cloudless, star-shot sky; I muse what might have been if we had met each other on some distant shore, far, far away; would we have sparked a love affair to last until the end of days? But long ago, when we were young; would we have known what now, we find? Hopeless romantics, you and I... this kindredness, close intertwined. I would imagine so; hopeless romantics only are perceived as hopeless, in the eyes of those, who in romance, do not believe. And, you and I are not cut from that cloth; we know romance is real. It tip-toes through the words we use; it echoes in the thoughts we feel. For love, unless it's mad and passionate, and quite extraordinary, is just a waste of time... love cannot be just mediocrity. This, then, is not a word I think to use in matters of we two, there is no mediocrity; not you, to me, nor me, to you. For, if a soul speaks with its eyes; with just a gaze,then, we can kiss; and if a soul can touch, with thoughts; then, I indeed, can you, caress. Whilst travelling the pathway, finding love somewhere along the way, why then, does everything look new and different; not like yesterday? It's still the same old pathway that we know; we just don't realise nothing changed out there; it's just that Love has given us new eyes. But, then... the saddest thing must be to go through life without loving; no tear, nor sigh to mark one's passing; that would be a bitter thing. But, almost equal sad; to leave this world, not having spent the time ever telling those we loved, we love them; whispering... "Please, be mine." For, what is given by the heart, is never lost, will never fade, for it is kept in someone else's heart; a wordless promise made. An act of faith; no guarantee; nothing expected, as a right, This, then... the love, Romantics seek; this vision, shining pure, and bright. This, then... the Covenant I make with you beneath this Poet's Moon. Life's worth is not for measuring in hours or coin, or words bestrewn about, in careless fashion... but, by how much love, along the way we exchange, and share with one another... Feelings we display. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"For love, unless it's mad and passionate, and quite extraordinary, is just a waste of time... love cannot be just mediocrity" beautiful "But, almost equal sad; to leave this world, not having spent the time ever telling those we loved, we love them; whispering... "Please, be mine."" exactly...yes! LOVED this...such a keeper! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is a beautiful write! ~ Excellent photo to go with it! ~ Wonderful concept as well ARCTIC WIND |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
For, what is given by the heart, is never lost, will never fade, for it is kept in someone else's heart; a wordless promise made. That is absolutely PERFECT. What a beautiful write. Thanks for sharing with us, Tracey. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
as always ... fine imagery (both poetic and pictorial) and Romanticism! Grand title as well... MUCH applause !! |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
I'm not a big fan of pictures and such, but I am a fan of this poem. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A beautiful poem dear Tracey written by someone with great expertise. most enjoyable. A big hug my friend. Lindsay |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and if a soul can touch, with thoughts; then, I indeed, can you, caress. There are so many wonderful lines... but this one reached right into my heart. *S* Beautiful work!! |
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