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WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

0 posted 2009-02-26 08:05 PM

Today
(at the river)
I think of you,
beautiful,
rare and strange
in your love.

Painful it is,
loving you;
wanting you,
knowing
the change that needs take place
before we can be as one;
before my love consumes me.

Tears flow:
I cry out
“I love you!”
hoping the wind
will carry my words,
wherever you are.

In my tears
I vow every night
to imagine you–
your beauty beside me:
one morning
I will awake
and you’ll be there.

[This message has been edited by WindWalker (02-27-2009 01:39 AM).]

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-02-26 09:33 PM

Yo WindWalker,

The thought is very much there. However, why put a comma after a colon. I don't understand that. I'm sure its correct, I just don't understand it.

Bobby

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2009-02-26 09:33 PM

(:

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2009-02-26 10:24 PM

I hope that happens.
You awake and your greatest love is there beside you.
I wish that on everybody.

Very nice, well expressed writing.

Eric

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2009-02-27 01:38 PM

WindWalker - true feelings written in words in this poem, nice write...

BC

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2009-02-27 02:03 PM

"I cry out
“I love you!”
hoping the wind
will carry my words,
wherever you are."

~ May she hear your plaintif cry, Dear One With Wind. Awake in the morning with the wind having done your bidding and your love lying there beside you.

Linda

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2009-02-27 03:20 PM

fine Romanticism!

applause!!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2009-02-27 05:05 PM

Each line sings the refrain of a yearning heart beat. May she find her way to your path, WW.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2009-02-27 05:06 PM

tender ache....done beautifully

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2009-02-27 07:01 PM

I love this one

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

10 posted 2009-02-27 08:22 PM

one morning
I will awake
and you’ll be there.

And I wish you well.

Lindsay

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2009-03-01 12:02 PM

Nice...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

12 posted 2009-03-29 07:26 PM

a "slice of the 'everyman's life" Romanticism:

"I cry out
'I love you!'
hoping the wind
will carry my words,
wherever you are."

unfortunately many (most?) of us have likely 'been there' ...

continuing applause for this 'penning'!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2009-03-30 03:43 PM

I cry out
“I love you!”
hoping the wind
will carry my words,
wherever you are.

I hope the wind is a kind one. *S* Beautiful write!

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