Open Poetry #44 |
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Dreamweaver. |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
![]() Come whisper softly, as I sleep; come, weave a little dream for me. Some gentle, feminine confection... perfumed unreality; some sweet, subconscious idyll, or, some fragile gossamer delight, to soft enfold me, with your grace, to keep me warm on lonely nights. Come whisper softly, as I sleep; come, weave a little dream for me. I need your gentle smile again, to light the dark, so I can see once more, the magic in your eyes, that holds me safe, away from harm; a smile that I can always trust... not one polluted with false charm. Come whisper softly, as I sleep; come, weave a little dream for me, 'J'entend ton coeur'... I hear your heart; it soothes my soul, exquisitely. Shall we dance barefoot, on moon-washed lawns of Chamomile, tonight? Could we walk through saffron sunsets, bathed in soft, warm, golden light? Come whisper softly, as I sleep; come, weave a little dream for me. We could capture sunbeams from the gentle breeze, so easily, lay them, golden... in the grass; lovers, on a bed of flowers; fragrant summer splendour, drifting in your arms through languid hours. Come whisper softly, as I sleep; come, weave a little dream for me. Shall we run through rainbows shimmering in the haze, so wistfully? or, by the glowing tongues of candles; lose ourselves in love's sweet chase; the candlelight adores you, Golden goddess, soft, in my embrace. Come whisper softly, as I sleep; come, weave a little dream for me. Dancing 'neath a Poet's moon; by faint and fragile light, I see perhaps, love in your eyes, or was it just reflection there, of mine? Oh, no... the shadows of the morning gather; that thought was a sign. Go quickly, whilst I sleep; undo this little dream you wove for me. The shadows on the other side of morning come... can you not see this broken dream could summon phantom lovers from the jealous dawn? and I could not betray you so; Dreamweaver... time that you were gone. |
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"Come whisper softly, as I sleep; come, weave a little dream for me, 'J'entend ton coeur'... I hear your heart; it soothes my soul, exquisitely. Shall we dance barefoot, on moon-washed lawns of Chamomile, tonight? Could we walk through saffron sunsets, bathed in soft, warm, golden light?" *sighs* ![]() this is so soft...and you know I'm going to say it....sweet ![]() |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I like this ~ COOL picture ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a beautiful picture to go with this magnificent poem. Love the title too. Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a beautiful picture to go with this magnificent poem. Love the title too. Ida |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Come whisper softly, as I sleep; come, weave a little dream for me. Shall we run through rainbows shimmering in the haze, so wistfully? or, by the glowing tongues of candles; lose ourselves in love's sweet chase; the candlelight adores you, Golden goddess, soft, in my embrace. I loved your poem Windhover but especially the above verse. You have a very good style of writing, very pleasing to read, well done Take care my friend. Lindsay |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
This is great. Nice soft words and flow. You kept the voice steady throughout. Very commendable. |
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