Open Poetry #44 |
Bones Bad Teeth |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones has the mouthful of bad, jagged teeth. They’re all rotten and snaggletooth. If his clients were after kissing him, or smelling his breath, he’d starve to death. Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
oh um, that's not good lol ~ Dental health is important, right? ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Poor Bones! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
God has created beautiful beeings but surely he missed the teeth, or is it candies ? thanks for the intriguing poem. yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Artic Wind, You're absolutely right. I'll inform Bones. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Kacy, For your concern for Bones. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, Yeah, that must be it. Too much candy and rich living in general. That's Bones for you. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (03-26-2009 05:35 PM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
LOL! Bobby you are quite a character. Yes, he would starve to death.......But there would be some clients. Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, Yes, a client can always find Bones, and Bones can always find a client. Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
It's sad but dental care is often indicative of income levels. We often can't afford what we need. You wrote this well, Bobby. I have a picture of those who paid to use Bones - and how sad that his breath was a non issue to them. You write poems about life on so many levels. Alison |
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