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Open Poetry #44

your love / listens / for echoes

shirtless
Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2009-01-07 01:45 PM

your love
listens
for echoes

mine
a breeze
in the hallway
unable
to turn
at an open door

so beneath stars
we are deaf to
we track
an animal
we have never seen

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2009-01-07 05:50 PM

wonderful Anthony... I always enjoy reading your beautiful thoughts.. Happy New Year my friend...

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2009-01-08 02:21 AM

Reminds me of Billy Joel's song 'Innocent Man'

Good writing. It's true many hide within and some never escape.....Where does that fear come from?

Enjoyed!

Eric

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2009-01-08 10:52 AM

Powerful words that touch the heart.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2009-01-08 07:19 PM

Fine writing...James

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