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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 Your lips speak velvet tissues, drying eyes, once cold, dark, your warm love has seared them, steamy, vapor, mist, arises, beads of sweat drop, intense love, bursts open , lava liquid flows, awww...clutch this heart tightly, feel the beat you placed within, kiss me, and never speak of darkness ever again...  May I return the favor of your gift? these are not mere words, but pieces of your heart, A shattered glass sheath broken, your shards are piercing, the soul of me.... You grace me with your beauty, beauty unmeasurable, Who am I to receive such gifts of love,? shinny adornments, cloaked with your words, the world is mine to conquer, Tonight I shall sleep like a Queen... For into your heart, I am reborn.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
cloaked with your words, the world is mine to conquer, Love does empower, doesn't it? *S* Enjoyed this write very much! |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
This poem drew tears from me dear Heart. The beauty of your feelings lovingly crafted into words is amaranthine. With love, Luke. A chorus of agony from heaven and rain poured in a colossus of angel's tears. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
a rainbow of velvet and showers, ... both given of life! A heartening write  In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow. - Ct/05 |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"kiss me, and never speak of darkness(!)" ... WHAT a great line! AND I am also especially fond of the ending!: "cloaked with your words, the world is mine to conquer... For into your heart, I am reborn." ... now THAT is particularly excellent! [sorry ... however, I think v. large graphics images detract from the power and impact of a 'write' though] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
For into your heart, I am reborn......." I love this, love love love this! ~ Excellent write dearest poetess ARH!  ARCTIC WIND |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"kiss me, and never speak of darkness(!)" continuing applause !! |
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