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Open Poetry #44

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

0 posted 2009-03-24 10:15 PM

I left my body,
I await you in my dreams,
It's been so long now...

Out of reach, out of sight
I feel strange and lost
Can you lead me right?
It's too dark for me to see,
capture of soul won't you please forgive me

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-03-24 10:17 PM

ah Luke, I know what this is like

nicely done and great picture

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-03-24 10:32 PM

Yo Suncleaver,

This is an excellent Senryu. I like it loads. Well done!

Bobby

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2009-03-25 12:20 PM

Dream time is my favorite time

I shall meet you there...

lovely Picture...

more lovely is the heart,
from which these words came....

~Love
~ARH

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-03-25 08:51 AM

Oh, wow... liked this very much!!

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