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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2009-03-24 04:41 PM


Entrancing, the mind which moves me so
Embracing more, the more I come to know
To play in gardens of thought
Treading paths where the wildflowers grow

Delving depths within unexplored regrets
Penetrating all of her dark what-if secrets
Becoming one body through the mind
Someplace between where fantasy and reality met

Laid upon the altar of fortunate chance
I visualize the moves of one happy dance
Beating to a most natural rhythm
Mystic for all its glorious happenstance

Breathing, the ageless incantation
A mind enters a mind in a new relation
And bares all, one to the other
Entranced by this pleasurable transmutation


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1 posted 2009-03-24 08:39 PM


a fine romantic write here!

beautiful

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2 posted 2009-03-25 08:48 AM


To play in gardens of thought
Treading paths where the wildflowers grow

Entrancing, enchanting, exquisitely romantic... your words are all this and more. *S* I especially love the last verse... it's breathtakingly beautiful!!

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3 posted 2009-03-25 09:12 AM


"Delving depths within unexplored regrets
Penetrating all of her dark what-if secrets
Becoming one body through the mind
Someplace between where fantasy and reality met"

loved this

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