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Entrancing |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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Entrancing, the mind which moves me so Embracing more, the more I come to know To play in gardens of thought Treading paths where the wildflowers grow Delving depths within unexplored regrets Penetrating all of her dark what-if secrets Becoming one body through the mind Someplace between where fantasy and reality met Laid upon the altar of fortunate chance I visualize the moves of one happy dance Beating to a most natural rhythm Mystic for all its glorious happenstance Breathing, the ageless incantation A mind enters a mind in a new relation And bares all, one to the other Entranced by this pleasurable transmutation |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a fine romantic write here! beautiful |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
To play in gardens of thought Treading paths where the wildflowers grow Entrancing, enchanting, exquisitely romantic... your words are all this and more. *S* I especially love the last verse... it's breathtakingly beautiful!! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Delving depths within unexplored regrets Penetrating all of her dark what-if secrets Becoming one body through the mind Someplace between where fantasy and reality met" loved this  |
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