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wind wife's bed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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sometimes on those sunday afternoons the wind is as a nervous wife dancing with a handy stranger fearing the husbandman with cold hands she feels her edges on his freedom the singe of tingling seduction as if his purple mountains were alive he warms the skin of her breathing she hurries to know of his horizon and glances over her hollow shoulder as she moves across his face skin to form a smile in the grave of him the leather men fall too quickly in love when she selects their highways as her bed they exchange their freedom for her curves her gusting undulations they savor as submission though on any sunday she will be newly nervous _______________ daark (owgish) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
And here I thought that Sunday was supposed to be a day of rest!  lol"they exchange their freedom for her curves" ~ Sounds like a fair exchange!   EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
she hurries to know of his horizon and glances over her hollow shoulder as she moves across his face skin to form a smile in the grave of him sssssssssssssssssssssuperb!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Wind and freedom through your words become immortal emotions. Awesome! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ea..thanks babe ______________ ms suthern, thanks for the ride along.. __________________ ms mar, thanks lady friend for looking in |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
LOL I agree with EA! ~ Enjoyed this Dark Stranger, you always seem to write with a wonderful poetic pen! Wonderful ARCTIC WIND |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...Oh, how I miss the winds of the south!! |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Truly great to read. Again DS, your humble fan. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
aw-some-as-always WT |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
AW...thanks amigo _______________ ms Martie...thanks neighborusedtobe lady _________________ CG, humble thanks __________________ WT, thanks so much for the read |
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pretty1 Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 22 |
The analogy of the traveled road and a woman's curves - awesome! I loved it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pretty1..thanks ms |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
It must be difficult to climb out of the bed of a woman like that - maybe that's why you spend so much time in it. (grins) A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san... can't remember if her name is windy or gale...though |
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