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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-03-20 08:07 PM


        Love?

grass in the wind
wind in grass...
oneness
we shall never
   know

      --- b. e. adams (3/20/2009)

© Copyright 2009 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2009-03-20 11:31 PM


Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

You never know Bro.  Don't count your chickens before they're hatched.

Nice little poem.

Take my advice about those chickens.

Bobby

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2009-03-21 12:16 PM


secondhanddreampoet - your writings always say a lot with few words, I do like them...

BC

ethome
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3 posted 2009-03-21 12:51 PM


Then you shouldn't smoke so much that you fall asleep.

Aw c'mon I'm just kiddin.

The wind in the grass is really quite thought provoking.
It brought this to mind for you and you made it a wonderful poetic reference.

Eric

2islander2
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4 posted 2009-03-21 04:31 AM


Yo John, the ambivalence of the states (wind in grass or grass in wind) is thoughtful and beautiful, thanks for the deepness and I appreciate very much short poems.

regards

yann

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2009-03-21 08:30 AM


John?
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2009-03-21 09:36 AM


Oh, but John, (lol ~ just kiddin', BRUCE), an interesting question you have posed here! You're a deeper thinker, than I. However, being the lover that I am, I would wager that the wind and the grass do love each other! The wind blows the grass seeds to procreate! So, in my mind, the wind is the male and the grass is the female and they are getting it on before our very eyes without us even knowing! Oh, well, love makes the world go 'round! ~ Especially if you are high on grass. lol


Linda


Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2009-03-22 11:23 AM


LOL at Linda's 'getting it on' comment.
I've always been fascinated by the way wind makes the grass dance,
the way grass undulates in even the slightest breeze.  

Martie
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8 posted 2009-03-22 01:41 PM


Hi Bruce...they give to eachother and become more.  The visuals in this are enchanting.
A Romantic Heart
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9 posted 2009-03-23 02:57 PM


Oh I love how they romance each other, seeing beauty in the simple things of nature....

It is a dance they share together...

I am all for dancing~
Ballroom dancing...(Fly Me To The Moon)

Dark Star
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10 posted 2009-03-23 03:01 PM


nice

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2009-03-25 06:37 PM


Enjoyed...James
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