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Butterfly |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. It flits From flower To flower Drawn To each scent In the neighborhood Without Any claim of being Any different than I Glancing Here to there A happy voyager Among all the offers In the garden . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You've captured the very essence of a butterfly. Well done, John. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
indeed ... a most fine 'capture' of both the quintessential butterfly and of Spring! ...Without Any claim of being Any different than I(!)" superb 'penning'...MUCH (sustained) applause!! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
nice |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo John, This poem captures butterflies well. Nice going. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
you captured my attention here, nice tribute to spring. regards yann |
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