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Huan Yi
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Waukegan

0 posted 2009-03-20 07:56 PM


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It flits
From flower
To flower

Drawn
To each scent
In the neighborhood

Without
Any claim of being
Any different than I

Glancing
Here to there
A happy voyager

Among all the offers
In the garden


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-03-20 08:05 PM


You've captured the very essence of a butterfly. Well done, John.
secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2009-03-20 08:14 PM


indeed ... a most fine 'capture' of both the quintessential butterfly and of Spring!

...Without
Any claim of being
Any different than I(!)"

superb 'penning'...MUCH (sustained) applause!!

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2009-03-20 08:54 PM


nice
Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-03-20 10:23 PM


Yo John,

This poem captures butterflies well.  Nice going.

Bobby

2islander2
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5 posted 2009-03-21 04:46 AM


you captured my attention here, nice tribute to spring.

regards

yann

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