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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-03-20 04:50 PM


in the bold-bright sky
a single white cloud
its shadow dancing
through this world

       --- b. e. adams (3/20/2008)

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Gaia
1 posted 2009-03-20 04:54 PM


Nice shadow dancing moment.
ethome
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2 posted 2009-03-20 05:44 PM


I've seen that and it's really kind of mystic special.

Good work Bruce.

Eric

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3 posted 2009-03-20 06:32 PM


If I were to show you my favorite part, I would be highlighting the whole damn thing LOL I loved it, from the first word to the last!

Excellent write!


ARCTIC WIND

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4 posted 2009-03-20 06:56 PM


mmm

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-03-20 07:36 PM


Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

Those drifting clouds always gave some relief during a long, hard work day in the field.  I remember that.

Nice poem.

Bobby

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