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Open Poetry #44
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peter griffin
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since 2008-03-06
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0 posted 2009-03-20 04:09 PM


culture creates curiously complex codes coaxing cavemen closer,
counting clocks complete civilizations culling,
contempt clears cretins craniums,
cold, consciousless creatures capture childrens consciousness creating crystallized corruption,
controlling circling crowds causing carnivorous chaos.

simplistic symbolism subtly, secretly, surrounds societies sacred systems,
sophists serve several separate, singular, situations,
spinning subtle stories, subconscious setups,
subliminal sickness, spread swiftly,
superb seers speak softly,
sleep silently simple subjects,
such severe savageness soon sees success.
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-03-20 04:47 PM

Extreme onamatapeia! (hope I spelled it correctly)
Now, to go and read it again!
Powerful indictments. Well done, Peter.
Artic Wind
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2 posted 2009-03-20 06:24 PM

I agree with Midnitesun!


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peter griffin
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3 posted 2009-03-20 06:45 PM

Thanks guys.  I didn't even know that's what onamonapea meant.
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