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rust colors in brail
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rust colors in brail |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you wore the rust colors again over your lovely and had the bronze showing here and there like seduction on a platter being served slowly you knew I was always hungry enough to never get enough, but you smiled anyway and said you needed to take a deep breath so I offered to hold you while your heart inflated repeatedly I said, and you asked if I needed a raft because your ocean was too deep for me to swim and did I still want more than even you knew you had as usual I didn't answer with words or with poems but with a look in my eyes that you had unbuttoned you said you would read me later with your thoughts like brail done over easy on love day afternoons and did I know you loved to read more than dream and would I mind being kept bedside and loose leaved _________________ daark (viscosity) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (03-19-2009 12:47 PM).] |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
liked this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you DS.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
As long as you write such masterful poems like this one, there will be no risk of rust ... (though the color is lovely, it just suggested this remark) ... you always provide for inimitable creativity. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
you said you would read me later with your thoughts like brail done over easy on love day afternoons and did I know you loved to read more than dream Oh, my. *S* I like the entire poem but really love these lines! *S* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh lookie here, an afternoon bedtime story. This is pretty nice poetry, mr. Mosey. Excuse me while I try to come up for air and catch my breath. Hugs you~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thanks so much lady!! _____________ ms bluezy..thanks for the read brat! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D This reminded me that my best loved treasures are at my bedside. They bring me comfort and dreams in the dark. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks lady friend |
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pretty1 Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 22 |
Makes my heart melt! This is absolutely beautiful. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Boooooful! "but with a look in my eyes that you had unbuttoned" Ha, I really love that! I love it all. Eric |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pretty1..any condition of your heart would be lovely, thanks babe _______________ eric..thanks amigo |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
love day afternoons... very nice. like the brail touch as well...she sounds well read!! |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Complete admiration for your skill. Very much enjoyed. Tracey. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Daark.. you are lovely this way! Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"so I offered to hold you while your heart inflated"  such a great lineM |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms spuddette..thanks so much ______________ wt, humble thanks for the read __________________ ms r&b, thanks lady friend _______________ ms MMs, thanks babe |
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