Open Poetry #44 |
Carry Us Into Forever |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Carry us Into Forever Once upon a star filled night I met an angel, its true. Softly she touched my heart and while looking into her eyes she told me her name was Sue. From that night our hearts knew that we would love each other while apart and when together. This is a special love that we share, a love that is fulfilling us now and carrying us into forever. JamesLee 15March 2009 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very sweet James! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, Romantic Island Man, may that kind of love carry you both into forever! May love forever light up your life! Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Loving Write! ~ Dreamy ARCTIC WIND |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awww touching write |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo James, You have a good thought here. However, that should be "it's" in the first line for "it is", not the possessive "its". Just thought I'd mention that in case you wanted to send it out for publication. Bobby |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
beauty |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very enjoyable to read. best wishes. yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The authenticity of your feelings is felt, dear James. The Ides of March have inspired you lovingly. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Seems as if Romance is circling the globe. But then again, you always share romantic memories! |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Mau Loa Nani WT. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - nicely written... BC |
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