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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2009-03-19 04:29 AM




Carry us Into Forever


Once upon a star filled night I met an angel, its
true.   Softly she touched my heart and while
looking into her eyes she told me her name was Sue.
From that night our hearts knew that we would love
each other while apart and when together.
This is a special love that we share, a love that
is fulfilling us now and carrying us into forever.


JamesLee
15March
2009





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1 posted 2009-03-19 09:48 AM


very sweet James!
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2 posted 2009-03-19 10:14 AM


Yes, Romantic Island Man, may that kind of love carry you both into forever!

May love forever light up your life!

Linda

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3 posted 2009-03-19 11:20 AM


Loving Write! ~ Dreamy


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4 posted 2009-03-19 11:28 AM


awww

touching write

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-03-19 11:42 AM


Yo James,

You have a good thought here.  

However, that should be "it's" in the first line for "it is", not the possessive "its".

Just thought I'd mention that in case you wanted to send it out for publication.

Bobby

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7 posted 2009-03-19 12:19 PM


very enjoyable to read.

best wishes.

yann

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8 posted 2009-03-19 01:52 PM


The authenticity of your feelings is felt, dear James. The Ides of March have inspired you lovingly.

Love,
Margherita

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9 posted 2009-03-19 05:28 PM


Seems as if Romance is circling the globe.
But then again, you always share romantic memories!

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10 posted 2009-03-19 05:50 PM


Mau Loa Nani

WT.

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11 posted 2009-03-19 07:18 PM


James - nicely written...

BC

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