Open Poetry #44 |
Bones Horrible Dream |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones gets dropped off after a trick. He doesn’t know where he’s at. The street seems to be full of Bible thumping Protestant preachers. They’re rather boring him half to death. There’s so many of them. They all seem to say the same thing. They’re stifling Bones. Bones runs and runs, and wakes up, lying on the bare floor in his own room, where he belongs. It was all a horrible dream. Bobby |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh Bobby, it sounds like he needs to borrow a 'salty' dream. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Kacy, A good salty dream comes in handy so many times. Love Bobby |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Those bible thumping preachers have no idea Bobby. People do what they have to to survive. I know Bones understands this. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Luke, For the kind words to Bones. Bones God understands too. Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Poor old Bones has some terrible moments in his life. Too bad there's not someone truly loving him to soothe the pain he feels. I always feel for Bones. Eric |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Bobby, I can't help thinking that the dream could be more vividly presented, perhaps with some of that good old Freudian distortion. By the way, Freud's On Dreams is merely a hundred pages, and a very accessible read. And after reading it, re-reading MacBeth becomes such a pleasure I can empathise with Bones. But without an experience baggage, without having threaded a path that sometimes met that of Bones, I'm not too sure how much I could relate, or feel it. Mark |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bones has enough to deal with in his waking hours! Perhaps a cup of warm milk before bedtime, would bring peaceful dreams whilst he slumbers. ~ But somehow, I don't think our beloved Bones is a warm-cup-of-milk kinda guy! Linda |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Sad |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, What you say is true. Bones, like many children, is alone. They deal with that the best they can. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Mark, For reading and commenting. Bones and I have never beed into Freud. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Linda, I'm afraid you are correct. Bones is rather lactose intolerant. I think he might be up for a hot toddy though. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juju, For reading and commenting. It really wasn't meant to be sad. It was a bad dream. Love Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Bobby, it is difficult sometimes to believe some people, preachers are people too and there are bad and good ones. thanks for the poem. yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, What you say is true. However, all the experiences I've had with them have been unpleasant. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
At least he could run in the dream, dear Bobby! Sometimes we are stuck during a nightmare. Well, but what did they say? It does not seem so horrible to me. I have endured protestant attacks for real as we, as catholic children, were the minority. It doesn't make much sense to me, being all Christians! Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, You are correct, it doesn't make sense. Also, it doesn't matter if it's about religion, or anything else. People shouldn't attack others for any reason. I do remember when I was a kid, one of those street preachers held me out in the rain on a cold afternoon trying to convert me. I was too polite to walk away from a grown-up who was talking to me. I caught a horrible cold that led to strep throat. It laid me up for about a week. I would have helped you with those guys. Us "cat-lickers" have to stick together. Love Bobby |
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