Open Poetry #44 |
The Black Armoured Knight |
marc3696 New Member
since 2009-01-02
Posts 9 |
The black armored knight. -------------------------------- On a cold dark night he will watch. The man who cannot talk. The man who cant be seen. Our guardian,our watcher. In the corner of a room is where he will sit For he is one of the very few. The men in shining armour. Destroying the spirits, who come to haunt us and the monster under our beds. With no thanks or no please he has to stand strong. Taking what the earth throws upon. He is what helps us when we are alone. He is the unknown voice in our heads. The one that makes us brave. The one that makes us strong. The person that can never be known. He is our protecter, our watcher. For he is our black armored knight. --------------------------------------------------- Sorry for grammer. Please comment and leave tips. Im not quite done yet im still fixing. pic isnt mine found it on images. [This message has been edited by marc3696 (01-06-2009 02:26 PM).] |
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marc3696 New Member
since 2009-01-02
Posts 9 |
sorry to double post but just to make sure this picture is not min i found it on Google and it just happened to fit my poem lol. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is excellent...made me slow down and read it slowly (a good thing)...strong enough to withstand a careful reading...good work...very good |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you for sharing your Black Knight, for the world is greatly in need of such protectors. Welcome to Pips. |
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marc3696 New Member
since 2009-01-02
Posts 9 |
Thank you for all the nice comments They really help me with my poetry it helps me know what style to write. |
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