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Krawdad
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0 posted 2009-03-17 11:33 PM



I ate an oyster from the bucket
it tasted better than a mucket
and with a glass of wine                  
oh it went down so fine
but not again 'cuz i upchucked it
  

      



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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2009-03-17 11:48 PM


Yo Krawdad,

Yes, that could be true.  You're supposed to take it out of the shell first.

This is a well written poem, and it works for me.

Bobby

Juju
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2 posted 2009-03-20 10:00 AM


Hehehe

Be careful were you get those shells.

Juli

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Margherita
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3 posted 2009-03-20 10:50 AM


Oh!! I am sorry!

The limerick is delightful though!

Love,
Margherita


eminor_angel
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4 posted 2009-03-20 03:07 PM


Lol! I love limericks, and this is a fine example of a delightfully humorous one!
Midnitesun
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5 posted 2009-03-20 04:52 PM


Oysters are disgusting, so that's what I'd do with even a good one.  (Karen will smack me for this reply. LOL)
Artic Wind
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6 posted 2009-03-20 06:26 PM


Midnitesun, bite your tongue, Oysters are divine! LOL ~ I love eating them, although, I do cut way down on shell these days

Enjoyed the read, glass of water perhaps?


ARCTIC WIND

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