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Open Poetry #44
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EvanescenceShy
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since 2009-03-01
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0 posted 2009-03-17 08:14 PM


Skin drips wet;
moisture running down the neck
dogs pant.Thirst for water
earth gives in to brownish haze
scorching sand, dry cracked dirt
holes that warn of slither death.Little shade in which to steal;sun beats down taunts violent death.
Liquid facade.Bluish gashes.

Mirage
Mirage?
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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
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England
1 posted 2009-03-17 08:54 PM

Excellent imagery sounds like a hot day in a desert
Well penned
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2009-03-17 10:04 PM

Enjoyed the Write!


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