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Open Poetry #44

Deep-Time Vagabonds

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-03-17 07:52 PM

Deep-Time Vagabonds

who would dare to count
all the mirages in a dream,
or each grain of sand on a
silver moonlit beach…
every world-mirror drop
of melting morning dew,
and all luminescent points
in the twilight-velvet tapestry…

only a foolish poet, romantic,
and ‘Deep-Time’ vagabond

--- b. e. adams (3/17/2009)

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-03-17 09:23 PM

Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

This is very good work.

I can picture the ‘Deep-Time’ vagabond, riding the rails of unreality. I remember those guys from growing up between the railroad tracks in Altoona, PA. Those are fond memories.

Bobby

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2009-03-17 09:27 PM

Bruce
This is a delight. It has such a nostalgic undertone.
After all who would dare except those who can't help but be that way.
Vagabond is the exact right catalyst mentally or physically.
Superb!

Eric

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2009-03-17 10:06 PM

Always enjoy a good SHDP poem~!!!

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2009-03-18 01:03 AM

Well, I think I'm a "Deep Time" vagabound too,
still counting.
Ida

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