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dirbax
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0 posted 2009-03-17 06:15 PM


Hi

I remember someone , calling me a rust
Apologizing later on , my ears were closed
The damage was done , my life was lost

Telling this story to even a nun , laugh is a must
Saying  no joke man , it's nothing more than just ...
Watching tragedy is fun , living it makes soul going bust


Some words spelt down , reduce life to simple dust
Cause dreams to be mown ,  despair growing fast
Make Heart as a stone ,  losing all whole lust

I decided on my own , to not make it last
Taking lesson from this one , Change is a must
This is a new dawn , making my horizon so vast



Author : Mr  Dirbaxer
Source: http://www.dirbax.com/my-writings/poems/words-damage.html

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1 posted 2009-03-18 03:51 PM


Some words spelt down , reduce life to simple dust
Cause dreams to be mown ,  despair growing fast

That they can. *S* And still my tongue's sometimes careless. *S* Welcome to Passions!

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2009-03-18 04:42 PM


"Take care in what you say. Words are like never-ending ripples on the Great Sea of Life. Once uttered, they can never be taken back." ~ a few lines from a poem I wrote, entitled "The Spoken Word".

Your sensitive poem brought it back to me.

Thank you for sharing your experience through this touching write. More people should take care in what they say and realize the devastating power their words can carry.


Earth Angel


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