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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
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 A memory comes out of the shadows Her father shooting dice on the checkered linoleum floor Ivory cubes bouncing off of the stove Landing by her knees Baby just got a new pair of shoes |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
succinct and quite effective writing... well done! much applause for this 'penning!' |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I need some new shoes too  But unless the dice are fixed, I don't think I'll get any. Never been lucky like that. |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
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Thank you both for the kind replies. |
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