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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-03-15 12:46 PM

Go ahead, rain your words down,
softly they pour upon my bare skin,
drop by drop, a slow drizzle,

taking me in, pulling me, drawing me,
heavier they form, each more powerful,
hitting harder, running throughout,

between every crevice, flowing,
forming streams of hope and love,
bathing me in rivers of romance,

now I am diving, swimming ,consumed,
drowning in your sea of devoted love,
drinking you, taking you inside of me ,



flowing through my veins,
pumping inside my heart,
you have become my life force,

I breathe, eat, and sleep you,
my love, my life, my fountain,
I drink from you, and thirst no more.

Bring on the thunderstorms,
let it rain, let it pour, shower me,
for you are my kind of rain!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (03-17-2009 01:41 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2009-03-15 01:26 PM

for some reason, I cannot see the second and third pictures but it's a beautiful poem

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2009-03-15 02:35 PM

Me too, can't see them.

But I had to pull me collar away from me neck just to let the steam out.

Whew! This one's a sizzling in the rain write!

Eric

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2009-03-15 08:40 PM

A Romantic Heart - whew, like ethome I'm sizzling right now. Nice romantic sensual write...

BC

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2009-03-15 08:55 PM

Yo dear A Romantic Heart,

I like your words. You do good work Hon.

Love Bobby

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

5 posted 2009-03-15 08:59 PM

I think we have the word . . . sizzle!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-03-16 10:35 AM

I've always liked the rain... but this kind, I LOVE!!! *S* Beautiful, sensual write!

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

7 posted 2009-03-16 01:12 PM

A very sexy poem, Romantic Heart.

I only would say that the script font hurt my eyes trying to read though. lol

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

8 posted 2009-03-16 05:14 PM

A beautiful powerful poem full of sexuality without sacrificing any of the pure romance.

You chose your moniker well A Romantic Heart.

With love, Luke.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2009-03-16 05:55 PM

nice

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

10 posted 2009-03-17 01:46 AM

Much love to everyone,
I didn't mean to hurt your eyes, lol
if anything, I wish to be pleasing to them,
thanks to each and everyone who has taken
the time to read and reply, it means alot.

Some more than you know!

In the future, I will keep the font choice
in mind....

besides, we can't have poets walking around with eyes damaged by my poetry lol!
~HUGS
~ARH

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

11 posted 2009-03-19 12:45 PM

I can't believe I missed this one dear poetess! ~ Beautifully penned ARH!!!! This is my kind of read! LOL

ARCTIC WIND

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