Open Poetry #44 |
Win-Dow |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Win-Dow The wind bares outside misting rain - Among minds inside listless reign. Rushing waves billowing currents - Rustling grave mourning susurrant. Blue green waters tranquil soft scene - Blues off white nightmare quiver scream. Healthy athletic sunshine tan - Empathy corpulent artisan. Teeter - Totter Win - Dow Window of looking in, at life's pleasures. Window of looking out, at life's treasures. Teeter weather - Totter feather Teeter chill weather - Totter quill feather Equilibrium of life's window How delicate of a picture pain. David Lester Young 03/12/09 © all rights owned by author De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time [This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (03-16-2009 09:30 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The tone of this write expressed the teetering weather of spring very well. The ryhme seemed too controling for the interpection of the write. You have a wonderful thought progressing here, and somehow it patters the mind long after the read. Enjoyed your muse. |
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