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Open Poetry #44

Twilight Epiphany

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-03-13 10:27 PM

         Twilight Epiphany

The last sky-edge sunset heron
sails the boundless star horizon
above this lake of rippling mirrors,
  and twilight forest...
where soft tree-shadows sway silently
in the gently pooling moonlight,
to an endless song of Nature’s
  benevolent providence,
and all things forever passing
into the infinite wilderness of time.

           --- b. e. adams (3/13/2009)

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-03-13 10:43 PM

Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

This is nice work. I like the concept of "the infinite wilderness of time".

That's a unique description of time.

Bobby

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-03-14 06:55 AM

I never tire to read your "frescoes" of twilight. You paint wonderful hues.

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2009-03-14 10:32 AM

"The last sky-edge sunset heron
sails the boundless star horizon"

Bruce, this is an image I'd love to see!

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