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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Old oaks In full leaf Cool blue Summer shade Boys on bicycles Imagining themselves Calvary or Sabre Fighter cavaliers Racing down the road Cats and dogs Patrolling Their neighborhood Oldsmobiles Painted olive drab Parked along the curbs Silent bats Flitting in the light Of wooden poled Streetlamps late at night While under a million Twinkling stars Dreaming about The girl next door You never cared for Not that long ago Though not really Knowing why . |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Fresh out of the pen I see. Yery nice piece. The Girl next door..hmmmmmmm, that brings back memories. Thanks for that The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
more FINE 'slice of American life' impressionism especially for all of us who lived those times! another excellent 'write' ... MUCH sustained applause for this 'penning'! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I really like this one. It's a keeper. Juju -Juju |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Funny how things change, Yet not so funny, really Nice memories. WT. |
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