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Windhover
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0 posted 2009-03-11 05:41 PM



The wind is in the East tonight; whispering like a lullaby;
A soft caress upon my face, gentle as a lover's sigh.
It wanders gently down the Vale,
and on, out to the open sea;
and, listening to its gentle song, a silly thought occurs to me.
A silly thought... but rather sweet;
wrap a kiss, in words of love,
and cast them out, upon the wind;
would they whisper high above
The Western Ocean,
carried soft, to find you there, so far away?
A gentle, whispering breath, to kiss your cheek,
at closing of the day.

Or, should I wish upon a Star?...
perhaps, the one that I can see
hanging, like a drop of dew on spider silk, out Westerly.
Low, there in the Golden glow of Sunset; sparkling, like your eyes;
in a few, short hours you too, might see it in Your Eastern skies.
And, perhaps, think of me; far away... cloaked in the dark of night,
perhaps, you'll wish upon that self-same Star that hangs there, clear and bright.
Another silly thought? perhaps; but sweet, as are all dreams of you;
one day, we might wish on that Star together;
dreams, sometimes... come true.



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1 posted 2009-03-11 06:02 PM


"dreams, sometimes... come true"

and that is the hope in a poets heart.



this is wonderful

A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2009-03-11 06:29 PM


I loved the hope and promise breathing from your words, the romance and love was the cherry on top! yum yum!

I think silly thoughts sometimes as well, but they are not silly thoughts at all, just poems waiting to be birthed into existence!

Thank you for the hope...

hugs~ARH

turtle
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3 posted 2009-03-11 06:37 PM


Wind,

You are a poet.


zaxby
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4 posted 2009-03-11 10:00 PM


Like a bottle tossed to the sea, this poem links hope and love sweetly, enjoyed
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5 posted 2009-03-11 10:51 PM


the sweet pain of distance . . .
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