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A WInter Wish (Senryu)
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A WInter Wish (Senryu) |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England 
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 Where snow gently falls And melts against yearning lips, There I will await. Dedicated to Shannon Rose Kelly, my beloved. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a gorgeous winter scene! I think I can see her eagerly waiting for you there in the trees! lol By now you must have penned enough love poems for your beloved Shannon, to fill a book! ~ and what a treasure that would be!   Linda |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Exquisitely rendered are the ice and heat of your words! Enjoyed, S-. Indigo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Snowflakes and kisses heaven-sent blessings of love to know true fusion * Beautiful words and picture. Love, Margherita  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A beautiful gift for your beloved Shannon! |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
OUTSTANDING post! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
If it was a kiss from you...I can see all that snow melting off those trees... A kiss to melt your heart .... I would endure the snow, the cold, for a kiss like that........ now where to I get one of those ? lol ~Hugs ~ARH |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful picture and beautiful poetically expressed thought. Eric |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
That is quite beautiful. I love form poetry, and this one proves why. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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