Open Poetry #44 |
The Cradle of Your Dreams. |
Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
When, at night, sleep folds you in its soft, warm arms... so quietly, and daytime worries drift away... where do you go... what do you see? Do we meet, as lovers do?... Upon some distant, golden shore, washed by some shining, silver sea... to pledge true love, for evermore? Do we walk, our hands entwined... in some dark forest, deep and green? Ancient... secret... full of magic we have felt... but, have not seen? Or, in some sweet-grassed bower... softly dappled, by the morning sun... we lie, and listen to the sweet song of the Birds of Rhiannon? Or, do we dance across the Heavens... moonbeams shimmering in your hair? To the sparkle in your eyes; starlight... made fractious, can't compare. Consumed with jealousy, the pale moon, faced with your luminous beauty, deigns... not to quest a cause... so lost, and, to a silver sliver, wanes. Perhaps, we walk through fabled lands... long lost, down through the mist of years; Lofty spires of crystal castles rising from smooth, silver meres... all filled with tears of star-crossed lovers... whispered dreams; how deep they lie drowned. Come, love... swiftly take my hand, this place is not for you and I. Then, there are those secret places, which, I cannot share with you; the pathways only you can trace, to seek out... and, perhaps... renew a love affair with some old flame; not quite forgotten... it would seem; but, then... this is the innermost secret of those sweetly furtive dreams. Slowly, drifting to the edge of sleep... my gaze makes out, it seems... a tiny smile upon your lips... safe, in the cradle of your dreams. I smile, as I explore your face, all framed with gently tousled hair; wherever you have gone, my love... I really wish... I too, was there. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww *goodness* you have a touch mister... *BAM!* right to the heart you go with those sweet sweet words |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Fine romantic poem, Windhover. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."Or, do we dance across the Heavens..." Or... Or... May I have all of the above! I'm going back for a second helping! ~ Literally! Linda |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine Romanticism ... an especially wonderful ending! MUCH applause for this 'penning'! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Simply beautiful! *S* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
oh my this one was written close to my birthday, what a treat! I agree with Linda, I must go back for a second helping....so much to enjoy and take in...."double, triple sigh!" ~Hugs ARH |
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