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All the Difference |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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Many years, I dreaded dreaming So afraid I’d wake up screaming Or quake, unable to make sound To deter demons that came 'round Hope was foreign concept to me For what had been would always be So daily, senses were assailed With thoughts of ways that I had failed Hating the day, fearing the night Is an unenviable plight I couldn’t seem to shake my past Just dwelled in regret’s strangling grasp. But then a hand reached out to me Accepting my impurity And lifted me to heights unknown No more am I adrift, alone. From all my fears, I found release Discovered hope and learned of peace, I dared to dream and reached for joy – At last allowed esteem employ. For showing me what love’s about And freeing me from fears and doubt I’m filled with humblest gratitude Each breath I give my thanks for you. [This message has been edited by suthern (03-10-2009 12:30 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is such a wonderful song of healing, love and gratitude, dear Ruth. Yes, there are those people who change our lives for the better and detach us from the grip that the past sometimes holds, giving us back the present. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am of the firm belief that the more our hearts are filled with gratitude ~ the more things come into our lives to be grateful for!  May the blessings keep on pouring in! ~ and with you continuing to be thankful for them! ~ even for the teensy weensy little itsy bitsy ones! lol Dear Lady friend, you are brimming with beauty and grace (and talent!) ~ within and without! Love to you and a warm, loving hug, Linda  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautifully expressed, Suthern and I agree, it makes "all the difference"  M |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
It takes a special person to overcome fear and doubt and to recognize what they have and be grateful. It is clear you are that person. Ida |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
Hi S, This is a very good write and a great testament to one's faith. Just a thought (for me) "esteem" in S5L4 would work better if it possessed "employ". ie. "esteem's employ". Other than that, I think this is perfect. turtle  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
But then a hand reached out to me Accepting my impurity And lifted me to heights unknown No more am I adrift, alone. From all my fears, I found release Discovered hope and learned of peace, I dared to dream and reached for joy – At last allowed esteem employ. Dear Ruth this is a very well penned post, sensual and uplifting and much enjoyed. love to you dear lady. Lindsay |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
THIS is what makes poetry so special. It allows us to dig deep down and express feelings in a way that no other form of communication can touch. Thanks for sharing this part of you, suthern gal, and you did it beautifully. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Suthern, There is a lot of meaning and hope in this poem. I like it a lot. Keep up the good writing. Love Bobby |
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Noel Junior Member
since 2009-03-06
Posts 42West Coast |
I know this feeling, and it's a long time coming. You expressed yourelf so well, I am happy to share another persons new found peace and joy. "Sweet dreams are made of this" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just beautiful - I wish you would post it also in the Spiritual Forum, for those poets to enjoy? Very poignant, and hopeful. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Love should always be answered with 'humblest gratitude'. Liked this. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ruth Love the lead up and the way you presented this. It's wonderful at the end. Thanks for sharing those thoughts. Eric |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh this is wonderful. It makes me feel like there's hope for all of us. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is beautiful and - might I add that I suffer from meter envy? You are a joy. Alison |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
This is very well written and so inspiring, love every line, reflection of a soul The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Hating the day, fearing the night" Y'reminded me of myself. I even went searching for a poem where I'd said I cursed the sun for goin' down and cursed it went it rose again. And nods about the nightmares too. I do try to look on the bright side though--I'm just glad I'm not Stephen King when that happens. Freakishly fretful!  Love ya muchly, lovely. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
suthern - this is a beautiful touching write, well done... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your big heart is so deserving, Suthern gal. Thank you for sharing the love. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Margherita: Thank you so much, sweet lady. *S* "giving us back the present"... yes, it is just that... a gift. *S* EA: I think you may be right! *S* At the very least, we're more open to seeing the positive. *S* Thank you so much, my friend... you're too good to me... but please don't stop! LOL nakdthought: Thank you very much! *S* Marchmadness: I'm not always successful... but I've been blessed too much to not acknowledge the fact and give thanks. *S* Thank you! *S* turtle: Thank you! *S* Lindsay: I'm so glad you liked, my friend... thank you! *S* Deer One: Such kind comments would mean a lot to me no matter what... coming from you... I'm most grateful... Thank you! *S* Bobby: Thank you very much! *S* Noel: They are, indeed. *S* Enough with the nightmares! *S* Thank you so very much! *S* Mysteria: Thank you so much, kind lady. *S* Chalmette Guy: I agree wholeheartedly. *S* Thank you very much... I'm glad you liked! *S* ethome: Thank you for your kind comments! *S* Pilgrimage: Thank you so very much! *S* Alison: You've just made my pen do whirlygigs of delight... thank you! *S* Helmut: Thank you so much, my friend... I appreciate your kindness very much! *S* serenity: There are parallels, aren't there? *S* And... I love you back. *S* Bill: Thank you, my friend... very much! Blues: Thank you for your kind response! *S* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is strength. and makes me smile |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
truely a pleasure to see a lady with her woman muscles flexed.. enjoyed your power regained here! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
SEA & DS: Thank you both so very much! *S* |
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